You have done two super short stories. Great distractions while you are writing multi chapert stories.
Your second story, "Intoxication" is wonderful. Oh, Captain Lee Crane wanted to apologize to Patterson for shooting him while he Crane was under the alien's control. I loved how Crane hesitated opening the door to sickbay where Patterson was and then he found him asleep. And later Lee Crane getting dutch courage drinking the admiral's whiskey. Adore the conversation between Admiral Lee Nelson and Captain Lee Crane and how the conversation bolsters Crane to believe that Patterson would forgive.
Smart idea on the header.
More ***Poms-Poms*** cheering you on your further stories. :D
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You have done two super short stories. Great distractions while you are writing multi chapert stories.
Your second story, "Intoxication" is wonderful. Oh, Captain Lee Crane wanted to apologize to Patterson for shooting him while he Crane was under the alien's control. I loved how Crane hesitated opening the door to sickbay where Patterson was and then he found him asleep. And later Lee Crane getting dutch courage drinking the admiral's whiskey. Adore the conversation between Admiral Lee Nelson and Captain Lee Crane and how the conversation bolsters Crane to believe that Patterson would forgive.
Smart idea on the header.
More ***Poms-Poms*** cheering you on your further stories. :D
*hUGS YOU MADLY BACK*